From Average to Band 9: Crafting the Perfect IELTS General Letter
IELTS (International English Language Testing System) is one of the most widely recognized English proficiency tests worldwide. It has two main versions: Academic and General Training. While the Academic module is for students applying to universities or academic programs, the General Training module is more suited for individuals migrating to English-speaking countries for work, training, or immigration purposes. The Writing section of the General Training module includes Task 1, where you are asked to write a letter based on a real-life situation.
In Task 1 of the General Training Writing test, your job is to write a letter responding to a scenario described in the prompt. This task tests your ability to communicate in writing using a style and tone appropriate to the audience and context. It is not about creative storytelling or academic analysis—it’s about practical, effective written communication, similar to what you might do in everyday or workplace situations.
The scenarios presented in IELTS General Task 1 are all designed to reflect common, practical situations. These situations may involve writing to:
Each prompt includes a short description of the situation followed by three bullet points. These points must all be addressed in your response for you to fulfill the task requirements.
Understanding the type of letter you need to write is key to choosing the appropriate tone and style. IELTS examiners look closely at how well you match your language to the context.
A formal letter is written to someone you do not know personally or someone in a position of authority (e.g., a manager, official, or company representative).
Example situations:
Language features:
A semi-formal letter is usually written to someone you know but with whom you share a professional or distant relationship, such as a colleague or a neighbor.
Example situations:
Language features:
An informal letter is written to someone you know well, typically a friend or family member.
Example situations:
Language features:
Misjudging the required tone—for example, writing a casual note to your manager—can lower your score significantly, particularly in Task Achievement and Lexical Resource.
To score well in IELTS Writing Task 1, you must understand the four criteria used by IELTS examiners. Each one contributes 25% to your total band score for the task.
This assesses whether you:
It is essential to write at least 150 words and to include all three bullet points coherently and completely. Missing even one bullet point can limit your score.
This refers to:
Good writing uses transitions such as “However,” “In addition,” “If you prefer,” and “As a result” to make the letter easy to follow. Your letter should feel naturally organized and easy to read.
This evaluates your vocabulary:
Using precise vocabulary like “reasonable,” “convenient,” “recommend,” and “suitable” instead of overused words like “good” or “nice” will help improve your score. Idiomatic expressions that fit the context also show higher lexical skill, especially in semi-formal or informal letters.
This refers to:
Candidates aiming for Band 7 or higher should show control over conditionals, modal verbs, and complex sentence structures without frequent mistakes.
Spending just 2-3 minutes to plan your letter before writing can make a big difference in quality. Follow these quick steps:
Is the situation formal, semi-formal, or informal? Choose the tone accordingly.
What exactly are you being asked to write about? Make a brief note next to each point with your ideas.
Think of your letter as having three parts:
Prepare a few phrases that fit your ideas, like:
Having these expressions ready before you write helps keep the language natural and confident.
Let’s take a common type of IELTS General Task 1 prompt:
A colleague from another branch is visiting your area for a few days.
Write a letter to your colleague. In your letter:
This logical breakdown will help you respond thoroughly and appropriately.
The IELTS General Training Writing Task 1 is all about practical communication. It asks you to respond to a situation with a clear purpose and suitable tone. Understanding the three types of letters, using the appropriate language for each, and planning your response effectively will help you perform well. By focusing on the marking criteria—task achievement, coherence, vocabulary, and grammar—you can ensure your writing meets the expectations of the examiners.
In Part 1, we explored the overall purpose and structure of IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, including the importance of understanding the type of letter (formal, semi-formal, informal) and how to respond to all bullet points using appropriate tone and organization. Now, we turn our attention to what an effective response looks like.
This section will focus on analyzing a sample letter written in response to a typical IELTS prompt. By breaking it down and comparing it with the four IELTS writing assessment criteria—Task Achievement, Coherence and Cohesion, Lexical Resource, and Grammatical Range and Accuracy—you will gain a practical understanding of what makes a letter strong and how you can model your writing accordingly.
Let’s start by revisiting the sample prompt. This is an example of a semi-formal letter where the task is to communicate with a colleague:
Prompt:
A colleague from another branch is visiting your area for a few days.
Write a letter to your colleague. In your letter:
Write at least 150 words.
The context indicates that the relationship between the writer and the recipient is professional but familiar. This sets the tone to semi-formal—friendly and respectful, without being too casual or too formal.
Dear Alex,
I hope you’re doing well. I heard you’ll be visiting our branch next week, and I wanted to share a few suggestions to help you make the most of your stay.
There’s a comfortable hotel just five minutes from the office called The Elmwood. It’s reasonably priced and well-rated by business travellers. If you prefer something quieter, the Rosewood Guesthouse is a lovely alternative nearby.
While you’re here, I’d definitely recommend taking a walk through Riverside Park—it’s especially beautiful this time of year. If you’re interested in history, the City Museum offers a great overview of the local area and has a few excellent exhibitions running.
If you have some free time one evening, I’d be happy to take you out for dinner and show you around the city centre. Just let me know which day suits you best.
Looking forward to seeing you soon.
Best regards,
Jordan
Now, let’s analyze this letter based on each of the IELTS scoring criteria.
Task Achievement refers to how well you fulfill the requirements of the task. This includes responding to all parts of the prompt, presenting relevant information, and maintaining a consistent purpose and tone throughout the letter.
This sample does an excellent job of addressing all three bullet points:
Each point is addressed and supported with details. The writer doesn’t simply mention the points but develops them with just enough elaboration to be helpful and engaging.
From the first sentence, the reader understands why the letter is being written. The phrase “I wanted to share a few suggestions to help you make the most of your stay” sets the stage and guides the rest of the content. The closing lines, “Looking forward to seeing you soon,” reinforce the positive, welcoming tone and bring the letter to a satisfying conclusion.
Since this is a semi-formal situation, the tone must strike a balance between professional and personal. This letter does just that—it avoids overly formal or distant expressions, but also avoids casual phrases that might be inappropriate in a workplace context. The tone remains respectful and helpful throughout.
Coherence and Cohesion refer to the clarity and logical organization of your writing, as well as the use of linking words and cohesive devices that connect ideas smoothly.
The letter follows a very clear and logical paragraph structure:
Each paragraph covers a specific point, aligned with the task requirements. This organization helps the reader quickly understand and follow the content without confusion.
The letter uses several natural linking phrases that contribute to its fluency:
These cohesive devices make the transitions between points feel effortless. The flow of ideas is smooth and natural, without sounding mechanical or over-planned.
The writer uses paragraphing effectively. Each paragraph has a clear topic and develops it with one or two well-chosen examples. No paragraph is overcrowded with information, and none feels underdeveloped. This is a mark of a well-balanced response.
Lexical Resource evaluates your range of vocabulary and your ability to use it accurately and appropriately.
This letter uses a wide range of vocabulary that fits the task and tone. Examples include:
Each of these phrases demonstrates a natural command of the language. None are too basic or repetitive. The writer avoids vague language like “nice hotel” or “interesting place,” opting for more precise and idiomatic expressions.
The letter includes several effective collocations—groups of words that naturally go together:
These are common, native-like phrases that help elevate the response to a higher band level. They show that the writer is not simply translating from their first language but has an intuitive sense of how English is used in context.
The vocabulary is also well-suited to the semi-formal tone. Phrases like “I’d definitely recommend” and “Just let me know” strike a friendly but respectful balance. At no point does the language feel too casual or too stiff.
Grammatical Range and Accuracy assesses how well you use grammar, including sentence structures, verb forms, punctuation, and more.
The model letter includes a healthy mix of sentence types:
This variety contributes to a more natural and engaging style. Relying only on simple sentences would limit the fluency and readability of the writing.
The writer uses modal verbs effectively:
Conditionals are also used correctly and appropriately:
These structures reflect a command of intermediate to advanced grammar, and they are used naturally in context.
There are no noticeable grammar errors in the letter. Punctuation is used correctly, including commas after introductory phrases and the correct use of the em dash for emphasis. Articles (“the office,” “a lovely alternative”) are used properly, which is often a challenge for many test-takers.
Consistent grammatical accuracy, combined with a wide range of structures, can help push your score into Band 7 or higher.
This model letter is an example of a high-scoring IELTS General Training Task 1 response. It is:
Studying this kind of response is an excellent way to improve your writing. By paying close attention to how the task is developed, how the tone is maintained, and how ideas are connected, you can begin to apply these same principles in your practice.
Even well-prepared candidates can lose valuable marks in IELTS General Training Writing Task 1 due to avoidable errors. These often have less to do with language knowledge and more to do with misunderstanding the task, misusing tone, or neglecting planning. In this section, we’ll explore the most common mistakes that test-takers make, explain why they negatively affect scores, and offer practical advice to help you avoid them in your writing.
Understanding these pitfalls is just as important as knowing how to write a good letter. IELTS examiners are trained to identify patterns that indicate weak performance across the four scoring categories: Task Achievement, Coherence and Cohesion, Lexical Resource, and Grammatical Range and Accuracy. By identifying and correcting these mistakes, you can significantly improve your band score.
A frequent error is failing to address all three bullet points in the prompt. Sometimes, candidates only respond to two, or they touch on all three but fail to develop them adequately. For example, in a letter suggesting places to stay, visit, and offering to meet, someone might spend too much time on accommodation and briefly mention the others in a single sentence.
Why It Hurts Your Score:
Examiners are instructed to look for coverage of all three points. If you ignore one, your score in Task Achievement is capped and may not exceed Band 5.
How to Fix It:
Plan your structure so that each bullet point gets its paragraph or at least equal treatment. Include specific examples or details for each point. You don’t need long explanations, but your suggestions must be clear and helpful.
Another common problem is misreading the situation or inventing unrealistic content. For example, if the prompt says a colleague is visiting for work, it’s inappropriate to invite them to a party with friends or offer to let them stay at your house unless the context allows for informality.
Why It Hurts Your Score:
Misinterpreting the task shows a lack of awareness and results in writing that is irrelevant or inappropriate. Examiners may mark the content as off-topic.
How to Fix It:
Read the prompt carefully. Ask yourself:
Then tailor your content accordingly. If in doubt, err on the side of polite and neutral language.
Some candidates write the entire letter in one or two massive paragraphs or divide it unevenly, placing all the ideas in one part and using a very short conclusion.
Why It Hurts Your Score:
Poor paragraphing makes your writing hard to follow. Examiners look for logical progression and the use of paragraphs to separate ideas.
How to Fix It:
Use 3–5 paragraphs. A simple structure could look like this:
Each paragraph should begin with a clear idea and build on it with 2–3 supporting sentences.
Many test-takers overuse basic linking words like “and,” “but,” or “so,” or they rely too heavily on mechanical transitions like “Firstly,” “Secondly,” or “Lastly.” Others fail to use cohesive devices at all, causing their writing to feel disjointed.
Why It Hurts Your Score:
A lack of cohesion makes your writing sound choppy. On the other hand, unnatural or repetitive transitions can seem forced.
How to Fix It:
Use a range of natural connectors:
These phrases should be integrated naturally into your writing without calling attention to themselves.
Using generic or overused words like “nice,” “good,” “very,” or “thing” weakens the impact of your writing. Repeating the same verbs (e.g., “go,” “see,” “stay”) also shows limited vocabulary.
Why It Hurts Your Score:
Limited or repetitive vocabulary is a sign that your lexical resource is underdeveloped. To score Band 7 or higher, you need to show a wider range of appropriate word choices.
How to Fix It:
Use precise and context-appropriate vocabulary. For example:
Make a list of topic-specific vocabulary for common letter themes: accommodation, travel, complaints, invitations, etc.
Words and expressions like “Hey,” “You guys,” “It’s awesome,” “Wanna,” or “Cool” are often used inappropriately in letters that require formal or semi-formal language.
Why It Hurts Your Score:
These expressions are considered inappropriate in formal writing and indicate poor awareness of tone.
How to Fix It:
Learn how to adjust your vocabulary based on tone:
Practice rewriting informal phrases in a more appropriate register depending on the task.
Some candidates stick to simple subject-verb-object constructions: “I stayed at a hotel. It was good. It had a park nearby.” These are grammatically correct but show no variety.
Why It Hurts Your Score:
Even if your grammar is accurate, a lack of range will limit your score to Band 5 or 6.
How to Fix It:
Vary your sentence structures:
Balance short and long sentences for a more natural rhythm.
Common grammar issues include:
Why It Hurts Your Score:
Frequent errors—even small ones—can make your writing seem careless and reduce clarity.
How to Fix It:
Proofread your work if time allows. Focus on your common errors and practice writing under timed conditions. Work specifically on:
Grammar-focused practice drills will improve accuracy over time.
Sometimes candidates start with formal phrases like “Dear Sir,” and then shift to casual expressions like “Hope you’re doing great!” This creates inconsistency.
Why It Hurts Your Score:
Inconsistent tone confuses the reader and shows poor control of style. It may affect your scores in Task Achievement and Lexical Resource.
How to Fix It:
Decide on the tone before writing. Use the relationship and context in the prompt as a guide. Stick to that tone from beginning to end.
Opening with “Hey” or closing with “Cheers” in a formal letter is a common misstep. Conversely, using “Yours sincerely” in a letter to a close friend may seem stiff and unnatural.
Why It Hurts Your Score:
Salutations and closings are part of tone and show awareness of social norms in English writing.
How to Fix It:
Learn standard greetings and sign-offs for each letter type:
Formal
Semi-formal
Informal
Use these consistently to frame your letter appropriately.
Avoiding common mistakes in IELTS General Task 1 can significantly raise your score. Most errors stem from a poor understanding of task requirements, tone, or structure, not from a lack of language skills. The good news is that these are correctable with focused practice and awareness.
Here’s a quick checklist to help you avoid common pitfalls:
Writing a strong IELTS General Training Task 1 letter is not just about knowing the format—it’s about consistent, focused practice using the right strategies. In this final section of the guide, we’ll go beyond sample letters and scoring rubrics to explore what examiners are looking for, how to build effective writing habits, and which techniques can help you increase both accuracy and confidence.
Whether you’re preparing for a Band 6 or aiming for a Band 8 or higher, the insights and strategies covered here will help you approach the test with a clear plan. You’ll learn how to set up your practice, use feedback effectively, and prepare under real test conditions.
IELTS examiners are trained to assess four specific criteria—Task Achievement, Coherence and Cohesion, Lexical Resource, and Grammatical Range and Accuracy—but they also look for subtle signs of competence that go beyond simply “ticking the boxes.”
Understanding how they interpret your writing gives you an edge during practice and on test day.
Every IELTS Task 1 letter has a specific function—to apologize, to request, to inform, to complain, to invite, etc. Examiners expect your writing to serve that function clearly and effectively.
Letters that meander without a strong purpose or jump between unrelated ideas often feel weak, even if the language is technically correct.
Strategy: Before writing, ask yourself:
Then ensure every paragraph and sentence supports that goal.
One of the biggest giveaways of an inexperienced writer is shifting tone—switching from formal to informal, or being overly emotional in a professional context. Examiners quickly notice these inconsistencies and mark down for them under Task Achievement and Lexical Resource.
Strategy: Practice writing the same letter in different tones. For example:
This builds tone awareness and vocabulary control.
Many candidates think that using complex or rare vocabulary will boost their score. However, examiners care more about natural, precise language than about long words or idioms.
Using phrases like “I am writing about…” or “You might consider staying at…” shows a strong grasp of task-specific expressions. On the other hand, forcing words like “utilize” or “plethora” into casual letters can backfire.
Strategy: Learn a functional language suited for letters. Create phrase banks for:
Use them in your practice regularly.
Now that we’ve covered what examiners look for, let’s focus on how you should practice. Writing letters randomly and hoping for improvement is not enough—you need deliberate, targeted strategies to build the skills required by the IELTS test.
Consistency beats intensity. Writing one letter every day for a week is more effective than writing five in one day and none for the rest of the month. Develop a routine you can stick to, even if it’s just three letters a week.
Suggested schedule:
Each week, rotate letter types and tones (formal, semi-formal, informal) so you gain comfort in a variety of contexts.
Practice using authentic IELTS questions—from past tests or reputable IELTS preparation sources. Random writing may help fluency, but it won’t build exam-specific skills.
Start building a personal database of prompts. As you practice, categorize them by:
This helps you quickly identify patterns and recall useful phrases in each situation.
One of the biggest challenges on test day is managing time. You’re expected to write a fully developed letter in about 20 minutes. Practicing without time limits might improve quality, but it won’t help your test performance.
Strategy:
Timing your work also trains your brain to think more efficiently under pressure.
Feedback is where real growth happens. Without knowing what you’re doing wrong, it’s hard to fix it. If you can afford a tutor, even just one or two feedback sessions can make a big difference.
Choose a teacher or service that:
Use that feedback to build a list of your error patterns (e.g., article misuse, tone inconsistency, repetitive vocabulary).
If you’re practicing on your own, develop a consistent review system. Use the 3-step method:
Keep a journal of corrected mistakes and phrases to review regularly.
One of the most powerful tools you can create during your preparation is a personal phrasebook—a collection of useful, high-quality expressions categorized by tone and purpose.
Formal:
Semi-formal:
Informal:
Making Suggestions:
Offering Help:
Making Complaints:
Regularly revising and using this phrasebook in practice helps you internalize expressions and increases your writing speed.
In the final week before your IELTS test, shift your focus from learning to refining. This means building confidence in the skills you already have, fixing small errors, and maximizing test-day performance.
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Day 5
Day 6
Day 7 (Test Day)
Scoring well in IELTS General Training Task 1 is completely achievable with the right approach. Examiners are not looking for perfection—they want clear, relevant, purposeful writing that communicates effectively.
By understanding what they expect, avoiding common mistakes, and building strong practice habits, you can approach the task with confidence. Remember that preparation is not just about writing letters—it’s about training your awareness of audience, tone, structure, and purpose.
To review the full process:
With regular practice, smart review, and good time management, you can meet and even exceed your target IELTS Writing score.
Mastering IELTS General Training Writing Task 1 is less about memorizing fixed templates and more about developing the flexibility and awareness to respond appropriately to a range of everyday scenarios. Whether you’re writing to a friend, a colleague, or a formal contact, your success hinges on your ability to understand the situation, adopt the right tone, and structure your ideas.
This four-part guide has taken you through every stage of preparation:
If you apply these lessons consistently, your writing will become more purposeful, structured, and fluent, and you’ll feel much more confident on test day.
The IELTS Writing test is not just about English proficiency—it’s about effective communication. Focus on being clear, helpful, and polite in your letters. If you can do that and present it in well-organized English, you’re already well on your way to a high score.
Best of luck with your IELTS preparation. If you’d like help with personalized practice, error correction, or feedback on your writing, feel free to reach out or upload a practice letter for review.
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