Skip the Comma: Situations That Don’t Call for One on the ACT
In writing, commas are essential tools that help shape the meaning, flow, and clarity of a sentence. However, they are often misunderstood or misused, especially when it comes to distinguishing essential and non-essential elements. A fundamental aspect of good writing involves knowing when and where commas should or should not be used, particularly when dealing with different types of clauses and phrases. This part will focus entirely on understanding how commas function around essential and non-essential elements in a sentence, with special attention to restrictive and non-restrictive clauses and phrases.
An essential element in a sentence provides information that is necessary to understand the sentence’s meaning. This information cannot be removed without changing the core message or creating confusion about what or whom the sentence is referring to. In grammatical terms, essential elements are often referred to as restrictive clauses or phrases because they restrict or define the noun that precedes them.
Take the following example:
“The students who study hard usually perform well on exams.”
In this sentence, “who study hard” tells us which students are being referred to. It restricts the broader category of all students to a specific group—those who study hard. If we removed the clause, the meaning would change to a broader, less specific idea: “The students usually perform well on exams.” That’s not the point the original sentence intended to make.
Because the clause is essential to the sentence’s meaning, it should not be set off by commas.
Non-essential elements, in contrast, add extra information that is not critical to the overall meaning of a sentence. These are also known as non-restrictive clauses or phrases. Removing a non-essential element does not change the main idea of the sentence; it simply removes some detail that may be interesting or helpful, but not necessary.
For example:
“My professor, who has a Ph.D. in psychology, gave an amazing lecture today.”
The clause “who has a Ph.D. in psychology” provides additional information about the professor, but it is not necessary to identify which professor the speaker is talking about. It’s assumed that the speaker only has one professor in mind. The clause is non-essential and should be surrounded by commas.
If we remove that clause, the sentence still makes complete sense:
“My professor gave an amazing lecture today.”
The main idea remains unchanged. Because the clause is non-essential, commas are used to separate it from the rest of the sentence.
One of the most important roles commas play is to signal to readers whether the information being provided is essential or non-essential. Commas are visual cues. When used correctly, they guide readers to interpret a sentence the way the writer intends. When used incorrectly, they distort meaning or create ambiguity.
Consider this example, which misuses commas:
“A friend, whom one can call at any time, day or night, is a person to be dearly appreciated.”
At first glance, this sentence might seem harmless. However, by inserting a comma after “friend,” the sentence implies that the clause “whom one can call at any time” is optional, extra information. In other words, it reads as if all friends can be appreciated, whether or not they are available at any time.
Let’s remove the clause and see what’s left:
“A friend, day or night, is a person to be dearly appreciated.”
Now the sentence feels vague and general. The original point—that a truly valuable friend can be contacted at any time—has been lost.
The correct version of the sentence should be:
“A friend whom one can call at any time, day or night, is a person to be dearly appreciated.”
In this version, the clause “whom one can call at any time” is kept within the flow of the sentence without commas, signaling its essential nature. The phrase “day or night” adds a detail about what “any time” means. Since this phrase simply expands on an already-clear idea, it is rightly set off with commas.
To fully grasp this concept, it helps to understand a few grammar terms:
Let’s explore a few more examples:
The use of “who” versus “that” can also serve as a hint. Typically, “that” introduces a restrictive clause (no commas), and “which” introduces a non-restrictive clause (with commas). However, “who” and “whom” can go either way depending on the context.
Appositives are another grammatical structure where comma placement is important. An appositive is a noun or noun phrase that renames or explains another noun next to it.
Example:
“My friend Sarah is a skilled musician.”
In this case, “Sarah” is an essential appositive. It identifies which friend the speaker means, so no commas are needed.
Compare that with:
“Sarah, my friend, is a skilled musician.”
Here, “my friend” is non-essential. We already know who Sarah is, so this information is extra. Commas are necessary.
Appositives follow the same rules as clauses: if the appositive is necessary to identify the noun, it’s essential and should not be enclosed in commas. If it simply adds extra information, it’s non-essential and should be set off with commas.
Misusing commas does more than violate grammatical rules—it alters meaning. A single misplaced comma can imply that something is optional or additional when it is crucial to the sentence’s point.
Example of comma misuse:
“The managers, who were responsible for the project, failed to deliver results.”
This version implies that all the managers were responsible for the project.
Correct version (if only some managers were responsible):
“The managers who were responsible for the project failed to deliver results.”
In the second version, the sentence makes it clear that only the managers involved with the project failed. The others are not being implicated. That’s a major difference in meaning—all determined by a pair of commas.
Let’s look at a few examples and determine whether commas are needed.
Sentence 1:
“The players who trained hardest were selected for the tournament.”
Sentence 2:
“My cousin, who lives in Denver, is coming to visit.”
Sentence 3:
“The boo, that you recommended, was excellent.”
Correct version:
“The book that you recommended was excellent.”
Understanding the difference between essential and non-essential information, and knowing how to punctuate each correctly, will significantly improve sentence clarity and prevent unintentional changes in meaning. Mastery of this single area of comma usage can greatly enhance the quality of any written work.
In written English, a frequent source of comma confusion arises from how writers treat phrases and dependent clauses at the end of sentences. These sentence parts often appear to carry less structural weight than independent clauses, but their connection to the rest of the sentence is often vital. When writers mistakenly insert commas before these essential elements, it can cause sentence fragments, misinterpretation, or logical breaks. Understanding how and when to include commas with ending phrases and clauses is crucial for clarity and grammatical correctness.
While Part 1 focused on identifying essential versus non-essential components, Part 2 shifts focus to how ending parts of a sentence—especially dependent clauses and extended phrases—should be treated concerning comma placement. Despite similarities to the rules discussed earlier, this section deals with sentence endings rather than interruptions within the sentence body.
A dependent clause is a group of words that contains a subject and verb but does not express a complete thought. These clauses depend on the rest of the sentence to make sense. Dependent clauses that appear at the end of a sentence are commonly introduced by subordinating conjunctions such as because, when, if, since, although, and unless.
Example:
“She stayed up late because she had to finish her report.”
In this sentence, the dependent clause “because she had to finish her report” explains the reason for the action described in the main clause. It is essential to understand why she stayed up late. Placing a comma before this dependent clause would wrongly suggest that the reasoning could be omitted, which would undercut the clarity of the sentence.
Incorrect:
“She stayed up late because she had to finish her report.”
This error disrupts the relationship between the cause and effect presented in the sentence. The comma incorrectly separates the closely connected thoughts.
One of the clearest punctuation rules is this: when a dependent clause follows an independent clause, do not use a comma.
Examples:
Each of these sentences contains a dependent clause that provides necessary detail. Adding a comma before the dependent clause would interfere with the logical progression of the idea.
Why is this important? Because punctuation affects interpretation. A sentence that includes a comma before an essential ending clause sends the message that what follows is optional or parenthetical. In these examples, the detail isn’t optional; it’s the reason, time, or condition that completes the thought.
The inverse of the above rule is also true. When a dependent clause comes at the beginning of a sentence, a comma should follow it.
Examples:
The initial clause in each of these sentences sets up context. A comma follows to mark the transition into the main clause. This contrast shows how comma usage shifts depending on sentence structure, not just the presence of a dependent clause.
Just like with dependent clauses, writers frequently insert unnecessary commas before ending phrases. The result often interrupts the sentence’s logic or artificially divides ideas that should remain joined.
Consider this sentence:
“I hope to live up to my mother’s expectations of earning a college education and finding work in a fulfilling career.”
This sentence ends with a series of connected phrases that serve a single grammatical purpose. They all relate to “expectations.” These phrases work together to explain what those expectations are. Let’s identify them:
These phrases are not part of a list but rather components of one idea. The entire segment functions as the object of the verb “hope.” It would be incorrect to break them apart with commas.
Incorrect:
“I hope to live up to my mother’s expectations of earning a college educationand finding work in a fulfilling career.”
These commas imply separations where none exist. They suggest that the phrases are non-essential or parenthetical when in reality, each is essential to the overall meaning.
To determine whether a comma is needed, consider these questions:
Let’s examine another sentence:
“Lewis knew he had taken a wrong turn when he saw a sign that read, ‘Private Property.’”
This sentence contains two dependent clauses:
Both clauses are critical to understanding the sentence. If a comma were inserted before either clause, it would incorrectly signal that the clause is non-essential.
Incorrect:
“Lewis knew he had taken a wrong turn when he saw a sign that read, ‘Private Property.’”
“Lewis knew he had taken a wrong turn when he saw a sign that read, ‘Private Property.’”
In each of these flawed versions, the comma confuses the reader. The sentence either ends prematurely or gives the impression that the latter clause is merely decorative.
Writers are sometimes tempted to treat long endings as lists and add commas to separate them. However, phrases in succession are not automatically a list. Lists consist of individual items, each of which could stand on its own. Phrases in series often act as parts of a larger unit, functioning together as a single grammatical element.
For example:
“The policy outlines procedures for reporting misconduct, documenting findings, and filing appeals.”
In this case, the commas correctly separate items in a list.
Compare that with:
“The committee set goals of reducing waste through recycling and composting in all departments.”
In this case, the phrases “through recycling” and “composting in all departments” are both tied to the goal of “reducing waste.” A comma between them would mislead the reader into thinking the ideas are unrelated.
Incorrect:
“The committee set goals of reducing waste through recycling and composting in all departments.”
Correct:
“The committee set goals of reducing waste through recycling and composting in all departments.”
Infinitive phrases (to + base verb) often appear at the end of sentences. Writers sometimes feel tempted to place commas before them, especially when the sentence is long or complex. But unless the infinitive phrase is clause-essential, a comma is unnecessary and ungrammatical.
Example:
“She volunteered to help organize the event.”
No comma is needed before “to help organize the event” because the phrase is the object of the verb “volunteered.” It is essential to understand the sentence.
Incorrect:
“She volunteered to help organize the event.”
That comma creates a misleading pause and interrupts the sentence’s logic.
To avoid misplacing commas with dependent clauses and phrases at the end of sentences, apply these general rules:
By following these principles, writers can avoid one of the most common and subtle punctuation mistakes in English: inserting unnecessary commas where phrases or clauses are vital to the sentence’s meaning. Proper punctuation, especially with ending elements, not only ensures grammatical accuracy but also enhances the clarity and impact of written communication.
In writing, clarity depends heavily on sentence structure. Every complete sentence must include at least one independent clause—a group of words that has a subject and a verb and expresses a complete thought. Problems arise when two such independent clauses are incorrectly joined together using only a comma. This mistake is known as a comma splice. It is one of the most common punctuation errors, and it occurs when a comma is used in place of a more appropriate connector, such as a semicolon, period, or coordinating conjunction.
Understanding why comma splices are incorrect—and knowing how to fix them—will dramatically improve your writing and eliminate structural weaknesses that confuse readers or diminish professionalism.
A comma splice happens when two independent clauses are joined with just a comma and nothing else. Though a comma signals a pause, it does not have enough grammatical strength to join two standalone sentences. Doing so creates an error that leaves the sentence structurally incomplete.
Consider this sentence:
“Jennifer is on her way to the store to purchase plates, napkins, plasticware, and cups, she is hosting a cookout Friday night.”
Here, we have two independent clauses:
Each could stand alone as a complete sentence, but the comma between them does not adequately link them. This construction results in a comma splice.
Comma splices create confusion and disrupt the flow of information. They imply a grammatical relationship between two clauses that has not been established. The reader is left to guess how the two ideas connect—whether they contrast, build upon one another, or simply follow chronologically.
Moreover, comma splices undermine the integrity of formal or academic writing. In professional contexts, they are seen as evidence of weak grammar skills. Fixing this mistake requires a basic understanding of sentence construction and an awareness of the punctuation tools available.
The first step in avoiding comma splices is to learn how to recognize independent clauses. An independent clause has:
Examples of independent clauses:
If two such clauses are joined by a comma alone, you’ve created a comma splice.
Let’s look at a few more examples of incorrect comma splices:
Each of these examples contains two independent clauses separated only by a comma. In each case, the comma must either be replaced or supplemented by an appropriate connector.
There are four standard ways to fix comma splice errors:
This is the simplest and often the most effective solution. If the two clauses express separate but related ideas, they can stand as two independent sentences.
Example:
Incorrect: “She loves Italian food, her brother prefers Thai.”
Correct: “She loves Italian food. Her brother prefers Thai.”
This correction keeps the meaning clear and respects sentence boundaries.
Semicolons are useful when two independent clauses are closely related in meaning and you want to emphasize that connection without using a conjunction.
Example:
Incorrect: “My toddler’s nap time is 1 p.m., he usually sleeps for about two hours.”
Correct: “My toddler’s nap time is 1 p.m.; he usually sleeps for about two hours.”
The semicolon joins the two thoughts with equal grammatical weight, suggesting a strong relationship between them.
Coordinating conjunctions (for, and, nor, but, or, yet, so) can join independent clauses when preceded by a comma.
Example:
Incorrect: “Jennifer is on her way to the store to purchase supplies, she is hosting a cookout Friday night.”
Correct: “Jennifer is on her way to the store to purchase supplies, for she is hosting a cookout Friday night.”
Here, “for” is the coordinating conjunction that provides a logical connection between the two ideas.
Other examples:
Each use of a comma plus a coordinating conjunction properly joins two complete thoughts.
Another way to fix a comma splice is to make one of the clauses dependent by adding a subordinating conjunction like because, although, since, or when.
Example:
Incorrect: “She didn’t study for the exam, she still passed.”
Correct: “Although she didn’t study for the exam, she still passed.”
Now the first clause becomes subordinate, and the comma appropriately marks the transition.
Another example:
Incorrect: “The project was late, the team missed the deadline.”
Correct: “Because the project was late, the team missed the deadline.”
This approach not only fixes the punctuation error but also adds clarity to the logical relationship between the ideas.
Writers sometimes believe that simply adding a comma makes a sentence more readable. While commas can indeed aid clarity, they must always follow grammatical rules. Adding a comma where it doesn’t belong—especially between independent clauses—creates confusion.
Another misconception is that if two ideas are related in content, they must be joined in a single sentence. This is not true. Sometimes, separating ideas into two distinct sentences is clearer and more powerful than forcing them together.
Example:
Confusing: “The hike was long and exhausting, we were glad to be home.”
Clearer: “The hike was long and exhausting. We were glad to be home.”
Separating the ideas gives each clause its proper emphasis.
In informal writing, fiction, or dialogue, writers occasionally use comma splices intentionally to mimic natural speech or to create rhythm. However, such usage should be deliberate and sparing. It is not appropriate in formal writing, academic essays, or professional documents.
Example (stylistic choice in fiction):
“I came, I saw, I conquered.”
This sentence contains comma splices, but the repetition and brevity give it rhetorical strength. Still, this is a stylistic exception, not a rule to be followed generally.
To catch comma splices, follow this process:
Practice identifying and correcting comma splices with examples like these:
Example 1:
Incorrect: “The movie was interesting, it had a surprising twist.”
Correction: “The movie was interesting. It had a surprising twist.”
Alternate: “The movie was interesting, and it had a surprising twist.”
Alternate: “The movie was interesting; it had a surprising twist.”
Example 2:
Incorrect: “He trained every day, he wanted to win the marathon.”
Correction: “He trained every day because he wanted to win the marathon.”
Alternate: “He trained every day. He wanted to win the marathon.”
Example 3:
Incorrect: “The rain began to fall and the game was canceled shortly after.”
Correction: “The rain began to fall, so the game was canceled shortly after.”
Alternate: “The rain began to fall. The game was canceled shortly after.”
Mastering this rule is one of the clearest ways to polish your writing and bring clarity and professionalism to your sentences. Up next, in Part 4, we’ll look at how commas function more broadly in sentence structure and how they contribute to effective communication when used correctly. Let me know when you’re ready.
The comma is one of the most frequently used punctuation marks in the English language, yet also one of the most misunderstood. In previous sections, we explored when commas should not be used—such as with essential elements, dependent clauses, and independent clauses. In this final part, we will examine how commas function positively within sentence structure to clarify meaning, establish rhythm, and improve overall readability.
Unlike periods or semicolons, which create firm boundaries, commas act more like bridges. They signal pauses, connect related ideas, separate elements, and help organize complex sentences. To use them effectively, writers must understand not just rules, but also how sentence elements interact and how readers process information.
One of the most familiar uses of the comma is to separate items in a list of three or more. This function enhances clarity by marking distinct items.
Example:
“We brought sandwiches, fruit, chips, and lemonade.”
Each comma separates one item from the next. The final comma before the conjunction “and” is known as the Oxford comma or serial comma. While some style guides (such as AP Style) omit it, others (like the Chicago Manual of Style) insist on it for clarity.
Without the Oxford comma:
“We brought sandwiches, fruit, chips, and lemonade.”
This version can be confusing, making it appear as if “chips and lemonade” is a combined item.
Consider this sentence:
“I dedicate this book to my parents, Oprah Winfrey and God.”
Without the Oxford comma, it humorously implies that Oprah and God are the writer’s parents. Adding the Oxford comma removes ambiguity:
“I dedicate this book to my parents, Oprah Winfrey, and God.”
When writing formally or in contexts where clarity is essential, including the Oxford comma is generally a good practice.
Commas help readers transition from an introductory phrase or clause into the main part of a sentence. These opening elements often provide background information, time references, conditions, or context.
Examples:
In each case, the comma signals the end of the introductory information and the beginning of the main clause. Without it, the sentence becomes harder to parse, especially for longer or more complex openings.
Short introductory words such as “yes,” “no,” “well,” and “however” also require commas:
Even a single introductory word benefits from this visual separation. It marks a pause in speech and helps guide the reader’s attention.
When a sentence includes extra details that interrupt the flow but are not essential to the meaning, commas set off that information. This applies to appositives, descriptive clauses, and side comments.
Examples:
These commas act like parentheses, showing that the enclosed material could be removed without damaging the core sentence. The sentence would still make sense without those insertions.
Parenthetical information might also be expressions like:
Examples:
Without commas, these interruptions can make the sentence harder to follow or distort its intended tone.
When addressing someone directly in writing, the person’s name or title is set off with commas. This use prevents misreading and reflects the natural pause that would occur in speech.
Examples:
Correct usage:
The same applies to interjections—brief remarks or expressions:
These commas mark a break in the sentence, helping the reader understand the tone and flow.
When two independent clauses are joined with a coordinating conjunction (for, and, nor, but, or, yet, so), a comma is required before the conjunction.
Example:
This rule prevents comma splices and clarifies that two distinct thoughts are being connected.
Without the comma:
This version is technically acceptable in informal writing but risks confusing the reader, especially in longer sentences.
Examples with correct comma placement:
Remember, this applies only when both clauses are independent (can stand alone). If one clause is not independent, no comma is needed.
Example:
Commas play a structural role in dates, addresses, and titles, separating different parts for clarity.
Dates:
Addresses:
Titles or Degrees:
These structural commas help distinguish parts of the information and ensure that the sentence reads smoothly.
Commas also play a vital role in punctuating dialogue and quotations. When a sentence introduces a quote with a phrase like “he said” or “she replied,” a comma is typically used.
Examples:
If the quote ends with a question mark or exclamation point, no comma is needed:
Commas always go inside the quotation marks in American English:
While commas are useful and necessary, overusing them can make writing choppy, disjointed, or even confusing. Writers may insert commas wherever they feel a pause should occur in speech, but that’s not always grammatically correct.
Examples of overuse:
These sentences are cluttered and awkward. Proper revision:
Effective comma use balances grammatical structure and readability without unnecessarily interrupting sentence flow.
To use commas effectively, think of them as tools that help organize your writing and guide the reader through your ideas. Here are some key takeaways:
Ultimately, commas are not about following arbitrary rules—they are about making your writing easier to read and understand. Every comma should serve a purpose, helping to clarify your message and reflect the structure of your thoughts.
By mastering the rules and understanding their logic, writers can confidently apply commas to enhance communication rather than hinder it. Strong punctuation reflects strong thinking. When commas are placed correctly, the result is not only grammatically correct prose but also writing that is more precise, persuasive, and professional.
If you’d like, I can provide a practice worksheet or summary reference chart for everything covered in these four parts.
Commas are essential tools in writing, helping to clarify meaning, separate ideas, and guide the reader through complex thoughts. When used correctly, they enhance the flow and precision of a sentence; when misused, they can lead to confusion or unintended interpretations. Throughout this guide, we explored the importance of recognizing essential versus non-essential elements, the role of dependent clauses and phrases, the dangers of comma splices, and the broader structural uses of commas in lists, dialogue, dates, and more. The key takeaway is that every comma should serve a clear grammatical or rhetorical purpose. By understanding the function of commas rather than relying on instinct alone, writers can communicate more effectively and professionally. Mastering comma placement is not just about following rules—it’s about ensuring that your writing conveys exactly what you intend, with clarity and confidence.
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